Well, what do you know? Two Wednesday posts in a row. Will wonders never cease?
Of course, the reason for my sudden surge in output has more to do with the work ethic of other, more prolific writers. Last week's post was about Chrys Fey's new book, Write with Fey: 10 Sparks to Guide You from Idea to Publication, and this week I'm happy to announce Jacqui Murray's new book, Born In A Treacherous Time. Here's the book blurb:
Born in
the harsh world of East Africa 1.8 million years ago, where hunger, death, and
predation are a normal part of daily life, Lucy and her band of early humans struggle to survive.
It is a time in history when they are relentlessly annihilated by predators,
nature, their own people, and the next iteration of man. To make it worse,
Lucy’s band hates her. She is their leader’s new mate and they don’t understand
her odd actions, don’t like her strange looks, and don’t trust her past. To
survive, she cobbles together an unusual alliance with an orphaned child, a beleaguered
protodog who’s lost his pack, and a man who was supposed to be dead.
Born
in a Treacherous Time is prehistoric fiction written in the
spirit of Jean Auel. Lucy is tenacious and inventive no matter the danger,
unrelenting in her stubbornness to provide a future for her child, with a
foresight you wouldn’t think existed in earliest man. You’ll close this book
understanding why man not only survived our wild beginnings but thrived,
ultimately to become who we are today.
This is a spin-off of To Hunt a Sub’s Lucy (the ancient female who mentored Kali
Delamagente, the female protagonist).
*****
Jacqui gave me a chance to ask her one question about her book, so here it is: "It's hard enough to get your books noticed these days as it is. Why did you write a book in such a tiny niche?"
Jacqui's answer:
Born in a Treacherous Time is written in the sub-genre of historic fiction called prehistoric fiction, a time before recorded history. There aren’t a lot of readers in this genre but they are devoted! Because the only records are rocks, world building has proven difficult but Lucy (the heroine) really didn’t give me a choice. She nagged me to tell her story from my first page twenty years ago to my final draft.
Now maybe Lucy will leave me alone!
Somehow I doubt it, Jacqui. Mark my words. Lucy will demand a sequel.
Anyway, if you guys find this concept intriguing, be sure to check out the sample chapter below. Thanks again, Jacqui!
Now available in ebook form at: Amazon
*****
Kirkus Reviews says:
“Murray’s
lean prose is steeped in the characters’ brutal worldview, which lends a
delightful otherness to the narration …The book’s plot is similar in key ways
to other works in the genre, particularly Jean M. Auel’s The Clan of the Cave
Bear. However, Murray weaves a taut, compelling narrative, building her story
on timeless human concerns of survival, acceptance, and fear of the unknown.
Even if readers have a general sense of where the plot is going, they’ll still
find the specific twists and revelations to be highly entertaining throughout.
A
well-executed tale of early man.”
Click here for the entire review
About Jacqui
Jacqui Murray is the
author of the popular Building a Midshipman
, the story of
her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy,
the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers, and the Man vs. Wild series. She is also
the author of over a hundred books on integrating technology into education,
adjunct professor of technology in education, webmaster for four blogs,
an Amazon Vine Voice, a
columnist for TeachHUB, monthly
contributor to Today’s Author, and a
freelance journalist on tech ed topics. You can find her books at her
publisher’s website, Structured Learning.
Lucy
Leaves Her Homeland
The scene replayed in Lucy’s mind, an
endless loop haunting her days and nights. The clear sun-soaked field, the
dying Mammoth, the hunters waiting hungrily for its last breath before
scavenging the meat, tendons, internal organs, fat, and anything else
consumable—food that would nourish the Group for a long time.
But something went horribly wrong. Krp
blamed Lucy and soon, so too did Feq.
Why
did Ghael stand up? He had to know it
would mean his death.
Lucy wanted to escape, go where no one
knew what she’d done, but Feq would starve without her. He didn’t know how to
hunt, couldn’t even tolerate the sight of blood. For him, she stayed, hunting,
scavenging, and outwitting predators, exhausting herself in a hopeless effort
to feed the remaining Group members. But one after another, they fell to
Snarling-dog, Panther, Long-tooth Cat, Megantereon, and a litany of other
predators. When the strangers arrived, Feq let them take her.
By this time, Lucy felt numb, as much from
the death of her Group as the loss of Garv. Garv, her forever pairmate, was as
much a part of her as the lush forests, Sun’s warmth, and Snarling-dog’s
guidance. Now, with all the other deaths, she could leave his memory behind.
Forests gave way to bushlands. The prickly
stalks scratched her skin right through the thick fur that layered her arms and
legs. The glare of Sun, stark and white without the jungle to soften it,
blinded her. One step forward became another and another, into a timeless void
where nothing mattered but the swish of feet, the hot breeze on her face, and
her own musty scent.
Neither male—not the one who called
himself Raza nor the one called Baad—had spoken to her since leaving. They
didn’t tell her their destination and she didn’t ask, not that she could
decipher their intricate hand gestures and odd body movements. She studied them
as they talked to each other, slowly piecing together what the twist of a hand
and the twitch of a head meant. She would understand it all by the time they
reached wherever they headed.
It was clear they expected her to follow. No
one traveled this wild land alone but her reasons for joining them,
submissively, had nothing to do with fear. Wherever the strangers took her
would be better than where she’d been.
Lucy usually loved running through the
mosaic of grass and forest that bled one into another. Today, instead of joy,
she felt worry for her future and relief that her past was past. She effortlessly
matched Raza’s tread, running in his steps at his pace. Baad did the same but
not without a struggle. His sweat, an equal mix of old and stale from the long
trip to find her and fresh from trying to keep up, blossomed into a ripe
bouquet that wafted over her. She found comfort in knowing this strong, tough
male traveled with her.
Vulture cawed overhead, eagerly
anticipating a meal. From the size of his flock, the scavenge must be an adult
Okapi or Giraffe. Even after the predator who claimed the kill—Lucy guessed it
to be Megantereon or Snarling-dog—took what it needed, there would be plenty left.
She often hunted with Vulture. It might find carrion first but she could drive
it away by brandishing a branch and howling. While it circled overhead, awaiting
a return to his meal, she grabbed what she wanted and escaped.
Feq must smell the blood but he had never
been brave enough to chase Vulture away.
He would wait until the raptor finished, as well as Snarling-dog and whoever
else showed up at the banquet, and then take what remained which wouldn’t be
enough to live on.
Sun descended toward the horizon as they
entered a dense thicket. They stuck to a narrow lightly-used animal trail
bordered by heavy-trunked trees. Cousin Chimp scuffled as he brachiated through
the understory, no doubt upset by the intruders. Only once, when a
brightly-colored snake slithered across her path, did Lucy hesitate. The
vibrant colors always meant deadly venom and she didn’t carry the right herbs
to counter the poison. Baad grumbled when her thud reverberated out of sync
with Raza’s, and Cousin Chimp cried a warning.
Finally, they broke free of the shadows
and flew through waist-high grass, past trees laden with fruit, and around the
termite mound where Cousin Chimp would gorge on white grubs—if Cheetah wasn’t
sleeping on top of it.
I
haven’t been back here since that day…
She flicked her eyes to the spot where her
life had changed. Everything looked so calm, painted in vibrant colors scented with
a heady mix of grass, water, and carrion. A family of Hipparion raised their
heads but found nothing menacing so turned back to their banquet of new buds.
As
though nothing happened…
Lucy sprinted. Her vision blurred and her
head throbbed as she raced flat out, desperate to outdistance the memories. Her
legs churned, arms pumped, and her feet sprang off the hard earth. Each step
propelled her farther away. Her breathing heaved in rhythm with her steps. The
sack around her neck smacked comfortingly against her body. Her sweat left a
potent scent trail any predator could follow but Lucy didn’t care.
“Lucy!”
Someone far behind shouted her call sign
but she only slowed when the thump in her chest outstripped her ability to
breathe. She fell forward, arms outstretched, and gasped the damp air into her tortured
lungs. Steps thumped louder, approaching, but she kept her eyes closed. A hand
yanked her head back, forcing her to look up.
Despite the strangeness of Raza’s
language, this she did understand: Never
do that again.
Feq followed until Lucy had reached the
edge of her—Feq’s—territory. Here, he must let her go. Without Feq, the Group’s
few children and remaining female would die. She threw a last look at her
brother’s forlorn face, drawn and tired, shoulders slumped, eyes tight with
resolution. Lucy dipped her head and turned from her beleaguered past.
Maybe the language difference made Raza
ignore Lucy’s every question though she tried an endless variety of
vocalizations, gestures, and grunts. Something made him jumpy, constantly, but
Lucy sniffed nothing other than the fragrant scrub, a family of chimps, and the
ever-present Fire Mountain. Nor did she see any shift in the distant shadows to
signal danger.
Still, his edginess made her anxious.
What
is he hiding? Why does he never relax?
She turned toward the horizon hoping whatever
connected sky to earth held firm, preventing danger from escaping and finding
her. Garv credited Spider’s web with that task, said if it could capture Fly, it
could connect those forces. Why it didn’t always work, Garv couldn’t explain.
Herds and dust, sometimes fire, leaked through, as did Sun at the end of every
day. Lucy tried to reach that place from
many different directions but it moved away faster than she could run.
Another truth Lucy knew: Only in Sun’s
absence did the clouds crack and send bolts of fire to burn the ground and
flash floods to storm through the canyons. Sun’s caring presence kept these at
bay.
A grunt startled her back to the monotony
of the grassland. At the rear of their column, Baad rubbed his wrists, already
swollen to the thickness of his arm. When she dropped back to ask if she could
help, his face hardened but not before she saw the anguish in the set of his
mouth and the squint of his eyes. The elders of her Group suffered too from
gnarled hands. A common root, found everywhere, dulled the ache.
Why bring a male as old and worn as Baad
without that root?
Lucy guessed he had been handsome in his
youth with his commanding size, densely-haired body, and brawny chest. Now, the
hair hung gray and ragged and a white line as thick as Lucy’s finger cut his
face from temple to ear. In his eyes smoldered lingering anger, maybe from the
shattered tooth that peeked through his parted lips.
Was that why he didn’t try to rut with
her? Or did he consider her pairmated to Raza?
“Baad,” she bleated, mimicking the call
sign Raza used. “This will help your wrist,” and handed him a root bundle from
her neck sack. “Crack it open and swallow the juice.”
Baad sniffed the bulb, bit it, and slurped
up the liquid. His jaw relaxed and the tension drained from his face,
completely gone by the time they passed the hillock that had been on the
horizon when Lucy first gave him the root.
“How did you know this would work?” Baad
motioned as he watched her face.
Why didn’t he know was a better question. Lucy observed animals as they cared
for their injuries. If Gazelle had a scrape on her flank, she bumped against a
tree that wept sap so why shouldn’t Lucy rub the thick mucus on her own cut to
heal it? If swallowing certain leaves rid Cousin Chimp of the white worms, why
wouldn’t it do the same for Lucy? Over time, she’d collected the roots, blades,
stems, bark, flowers, and other plant parts she and her Group came to rely on
when sick.
But she didn’t know enough of Baad’s words
to explain this so she shrugged. “I just knew.”
Baad remained at her side as though he
wanted to talk more.
Lucy took the opportunity. “Baad. Why did
you and Raza come for me?”
He made her repeat the question as he
watched her hands, body movements, and face, and then answered, “Sahn sent us.”
His movement for ‘sent’ was odd. One
finger grazed the side of his palm and pointed toward his body—the backtrail,
the opposite direction of the forward trail.
“Sent you?”
“Because of the deaths.”
Memories washed across his face like
molten lava down the slopes of Fire Mountain. His hand motions shouted a rage
she never associated with death. Predators killed to feed their families or
protect their territory, as they must. Why did that anger Baad?
“Can you repeat that? The deaths?”
This time, the closest she could interpret
was ‘deaths without reason’ which made no sense. Death was never without
reason. Though he must have noticed she didn’t understand, he moved on to a
portrayal of the world she would soon live within. His location descriptions
were clear. In fact, her Group also labeled places by their surroundings and
what happened there—stream-where-hunters-drink, mountains-that-burn-at-night,
and mound-with-trees. Locations were meaningless without those identifications.
Who could find them if not for their surroundings?
His next question surprised her.
“Why did you come?”
Bile welled in Lucy’s throat. She couldn’t
tell him how she failed everyone in her Group or explain that she wanted a
better life for the child she carried. Instead, she grunted and pretended she
misunderstood.
That night, Lucy slept fitfully, curled
under a shallow overhang without the usual protection of a bramble bush barrier
or a tree nest. Every time she awoke, Raza and Baad were staring into the dark
night, faces tight and anxious, muscles primed.
When Sun reappeared to begin its journey
across the sky, the group set out, Lucy again between Raza and Baad. She
shadowed the monotonous bounce of Raza’s head, comforted by the muted slap of
her feet, the thump in her chest, and the stench of her own unwashed body. As they
trotted ever onward, she became increasingly nervous. Though everything from the
berries to the vegetation, animals, and baobab trees reminded her of home, this
territory belonged to another group of Man-who-makes-tools. Before today, she
would no sooner enter or cross it as they would hers. But Raza neither slowed
nor changed direction so all she could do to respect this land-not-hers was to
move through without picking a stalk of grass, eating a single berry, or swallowing
any of the many grubs and insects available. Here and there, Lucy caught
glimpses of the Group that called this territory theirs as they floated in the
periphery of her sight. She smelled their anger and fear, heard them rustling
as they watched her pass, reminding her she had no right to be here. Raza and
Baad didn’t seem to care or notice. Did they not control territories where they
lived?
Before she could ponder this any further,
she snorted in a fragrance that made her gasp and turn. There on the crest of a
berm across the savanna, outlined against the blue of the sky, stood a lone
figure, hair puffed out by the hot breeze, gaze on her.
“Garv!” Lucy mouthed before she could stop
herself. He’s dead. I saw it.
No arm waved and no voice howled the agony
of separation.
“Raza!” Baad jerked his head toward the
berm.
“Man-who-preys?” Raza asked with a rigid
parallel gesture.
Lucy’s throat tightened at the hand
movement for danger.
“Who is Man-who-preys?” Lucy labored with
the call sign. “We don’t prey. We are prey.” Why did this confuse Raza?
Raza dropped back and motioned, “I refer
to the one called Man-who-preys—upright like us but tall and skinny.” He described
the creature’s footprints with the distinctive rounded top connected to the
bottom by a narrow bridge. She knew every print of every animal in her
homeland. These didn’t exist.
“No. I’ve never seen those prints.”
He paused and watched her face. “You’re
sure Mammoth slaughtered your males?
Could it have been this animal?”
“No. I was there. I would have seen this
stranger.”
Raza dropped back to talk to Baad. She
tried to hear their conversation but they must have used hand motions. Who was
this Man-who-preys and why did Raza think they caused the death of her Group’s
males? Worse, if they followed Raza from his homeland, did that bring trouble to
Feq?
Lucy easily kept up with Raza, her hand
tight around an obsidian scraper as sharp and sturdy as the one the males
gripped. Her wrist cords bulged like the roots of an old baobab, familiar with
and accustomed to heavy loads and strenuous work. Both males remained edgy and
tense, often running beside each other and sharing urgent hand motions. After
one such exchange, Raza diverted from the route they had been following since
morning to one less trodden. It’s what Lucy would do if worried about being
tracked by a predator or to avoid a group of Man-who-makes-tools. They
maintained a quicker-than-normal pace well past the edge of her world. That suited
her fine though she doubted that Man-who-preys could be more perilous than what
preyed in her mind.
