Wednesday, September 19, 2018

Give Your Fight Scenes Meaning

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I’ve been stalled on one of my chapters for the last several months, much to the chagrin of my critique group. The reasons for this delay are many, but one of the biggest has to do with the action scene that occurs halfway through the chapter. My character has to fight her way out of the antagonist’s hideout and choreographing the sequence of events hasn’t been easy. What makes this especially difficult is that she has no real fighting experience. She’s taken a few martial arts classes, but she’s never been in a real fight before and I’m struggling with how to make her escape believable.

But this post isn’t about my writing dilemmas. I’ll figure the scene out eventually. But while studying other books and their fight scenes for inspiration, I’ve noticed a disturbing trend. Many of the fights scenes I’ve read lately seem rather superfluous. They don’t advance the story. The character doesn’t do anything differently than they did in previous fights. The reader learns nothing new from the battle. It’s as if the author simply decided it was time to amp up the excitement and threw in a gratuitous fight scene.

I’m still a newbie at this writing stuff, but it seems to me that every fight scene in a story should bring something new to the table. Perhaps the character comes up with a clever way of using their special talents to overcome the odds. Or maybe they use recently gained knowledge to defeat the antagonist in an unexpected manner. Or perhaps the character takes advantage of the setting in a new and novel way.

Brandon Sanderson does a great job of this in his book, Alloy of Law. Although the hero fights the same enemies several times throughout the book, each fight feels different, and the reader learns quite a bit about the protagonist and his special abilities through his choice of tactics.

To be honest, fight scenes that are little more than a stream of punches and kicks bore me, and I usually skim over them. What looks exciting on the screen can be dreadfully boring when put into words on a page. It’s the little details that are revealed during the fight that makes them entertaining. If your fight scenes are so generic you could switch their order of occurrence without messing up the story, then you definitely have a problem. In the same way that a story's pinch points pinch  are there to demonstrate the character’s growth over the course of a story, fight scenes should be used to show the character improving in some way. 

That’s my rant for the day.

ChemistKen

BTW, another pet peeve of mine is when the author sets up and describes an upcoming battle as being nearly impossible for the MC to win, and then has the character win the fight using standard tactics and without breaking a sweat. WTH?




8 comments:

  1. You'll figure it out. Maybe something happens to those that are fighting her that stops them besides her own efforts?
    I only had two fight scenes in one of my books and one definitely advanced the characters.

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    1. I have multiple scenes where the heroine has to struggle with the bad guys, so I'm particularly sensitive on the subject of making sure each conflict is unique.

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  2. Heh, this reminds me of a chapter in my local critique group. I'm known to get hung up on mechanics, and if I can't visualize it, I wind up confused. Well, the author who is a personal friend and in the military, had choreographed the whole fight out with her husband, but when it got to me, I was all "why is there a chair?" to which she said "LONI!"

    Anyways, I wish you luck figuring out your fight scene! :)

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    1. Hey, it's missing little details like that that can ruin a scene. If it bothers you, I bet it will bother others.

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  3. I just finished rewriting a fight scene! It definitely moves things forward, especially with one of the subplots. Everything starts to change for my MC and his friends after the fight happens.
    Good luck with your chapter. I hate that feeling of being stalled.

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    1. Each of my fight scenes reveals another aspect of my heroine's abilities,so that by the time the final battle occurs, she'll be ready for the fight.

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  4. Very few fight scenes in my NA series. They came to a conclusion really fast. Most fights don't really last that long.

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  5. i’m with you, fight scenes need to be improvisized, spontaneous-like jackie chan! She can win by using some of her other strengths: wits? knowledge of the area? knowing the weaknesses of her opponent? I’m not sure what your situation is but that’s my advice

    and I’m finally responding to your question earlier this month at my place: So do you think you'll ever go back to trad publishing? I haven’t left traditional I’m still with my publisher but they do not do Novelllas so I tried those on my own
    if you go with self pub, make sure you have a good editor & cover person!

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