Lately, I've run across quite a few articles on showing vs telling and I'd like to share two of the best ones with you. One of the posts is from April, which tells you just how far behind I am in updating this blog, but both of them come from Janice Hardy. I read her blog every day and highly recommend it. I follow the feeds of nearly 50 blogs (no wonder I can't get any writing done!) and Janice's posts are the ones I bookmark most often.
In both posts, Janice describes some methods she uses to distinguish between showing and telling. In the first article, she explains how POV can be used to distinguish between the two. In the second article she demonstrates a another trick she uses to tell the difference. She writes:
One trick I use to show and not tell is to imagine myself acting out whatever it is my characters are doing. If I can do what they do, I'm showing. If not, I'm telling.
Be sure to check them out. I'm still struggling with being able to spot the difference between showing vs telling, but with all these wonderful writing blogs out there, I'll get it sooner or later.