Well, we're almost at that time of the year where I sit back and realize I didn't come close to fulfilling my writing goals for the year. In fact, I'm so far off that, at my current pace, I may not even finish them by next year. Yikes!
I have some vacation days coming up the next two weeks, so I plan on one last writing burst before the end of the year.
If time constraints don't allow me to post again before January, I wish you all a Merry Christmas and a happy holiday season.
Have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
What Makes a Story’s Black Moment a Black Moment?
Secrets to Writing for Kids: Even Villains Have Mothers
Let Characters Be Wrong
Rewriting: Something has to happen
Time for a Pivot? Kindle Unlimited and Marketing in 2015
Don’t Make Their Lives Easy
A Fun Exercise for Getting Out of a Writing Rut
Website of Ken Rahmoeller -- fantasy author, chemist, and lover of all things Hogwarts (Photo Courtesy of Scarluuk)
Friday, December 19, 2014
Wednesday, December 17, 2014
What Do You Know About Writing That You've Forgotten?
I follow a ton of writing blogs, always on the lookout for useful tips to increase my writing skills. After having done this for several years, I’ve reached the point where I don’t come across many pieces of advice I haven’t seen before. Occasionally I’ll come across a post that approaches a topic from a different angle, but for the most part, I already know what the blogger is going to say. Of course, that’s not necessarily a bad thing. Sometimes it’s good to be reminded of what you already know.
Case in point. Last week I was beating a chapter into submission (I never said my process was elegant), and feeling pretty good about it, at least until I came across a post by David Farland describing how to decide whether a scene is necessary to the story. Among other things, he points out that something needs to have changed by the end of the scene. If a scene can be removed and the story still makes sense, then the scene probably doesn't need to be there in the first place.
Now I’ve heard this before, and I’ve used this technique to tighten up my stories in the past, but as soon as I read that post, I realized one of the scenes I was editing didn’t really progress the story. Back when that scene had originally been written (an embarrassing long time ago), it had been a necessary part of the story, but after multiple revisions, the important parts had either been dropped or moved somewhere else and what remained no longer qualified as a necessary scene. And if I hadn’t been reminded to check my scenes for their worthiness, I never would have thought about checking again.
The moral of the story is this. No matter how much I learn about writing, I’ll always depend upon my critique partners, beta readers, and writing bloggers to remind me of those things I already know.
So what do your beta-readers have to remind you about the most?
ChemistKen
Case in point. Last week I was beating a chapter into submission (I never said my process was elegant), and feeling pretty good about it, at least until I came across a post by David Farland describing how to decide whether a scene is necessary to the story. Among other things, he points out that something needs to have changed by the end of the scene. If a scene can be removed and the story still makes sense, then the scene probably doesn't need to be there in the first place.
Now I’ve heard this before, and I’ve used this technique to tighten up my stories in the past, but as soon as I read that post, I realized one of the scenes I was editing didn’t really progress the story. Back when that scene had originally been written (an embarrassing long time ago), it had been a necessary part of the story, but after multiple revisions, the important parts had either been dropped or moved somewhere else and what remained no longer qualified as a necessary scene. And if I hadn’t been reminded to check my scenes for their worthiness, I never would have thought about checking again.
The moral of the story is this. No matter how much I learn about writing, I’ll always depend upon my critique partners, beta readers, and writing bloggers to remind me of those things I already know.
So what do your beta-readers have to remind you about the most?
ChemistKen
Friday, December 12, 2014
Friday Links -- volume 56
Nothing much to mention this week, other than the fact that my daughter's Kindle Fire stopped working... again. My guess is that it's the battery, and I think it probably broke open. A weird fog has developed under the screen, which moves about depending upon the temperature. It's not water, and the only chemical I know inside the Kindle that could do this should be locked inside the battery.
The first malfunction occurred six months after we purchased the unit. Amazon happily sent us a free replacement (which we've subsequently discovered was actually a refurbished unit). And now, one and a half years later, the replacement stopped working, showing exactly the same weird symptoms. Unfortunately, this time Amazon wants us to pay for a refurbished unit. :(
The Kindle Fire (1st generation) that I bought for myself three years ago hasn't had any problems at all.
I suspect Amazon is having some quality control issues with later models.
Anyway, enjoy the links and have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
Writing a Blurb for Your Book Cover
The F-Word: Tackling the Nitty Gritty of Formatting
Repost: The Reversal
Story Openings: Five Choices
Self-Promotion: About As Fun As Bathing In Hot Wax
How To Be A Good Critique Partner
Kindleboards
The first malfunction occurred six months after we purchased the unit. Amazon happily sent us a free replacement (which we've subsequently discovered was actually a refurbished unit). And now, one and a half years later, the replacement stopped working, showing exactly the same weird symptoms. Unfortunately, this time Amazon wants us to pay for a refurbished unit. :(
The Kindle Fire (1st generation) that I bought for myself three years ago hasn't had any problems at all.
I suspect Amazon is having some quality control issues with later models.
Anyway, enjoy the links and have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
Writing a Blurb for Your Book Cover
The F-Word: Tackling the Nitty Gritty of Formatting
Repost: The Reversal
Story Openings: Five Choices
Self-Promotion: About As Fun As Bathing In Hot Wax
How To Be A Good Critique Partner
Kindleboards
Thursday, December 11, 2014
Debt Collector Blog Tour
Today I'm pleased to be a part of the Debt Collector Series Blog Tour. I've read several of Susan Kaye Quinn's books before this series, and in my opinion, Delerium is her best book yet.
Some authors make me envious when I read their words. Not so with Delerium. Lirium's voice is so well done I just sat back and lost myself in the book.
So check out Episode One (for free) and decide it you agree with me. Besides, where else can you read a book written by a rocket scientist?
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Some authors make me envious when I read their words. Not so with Delerium. Lirium's voice is so well done I just sat back and lost myself in the book.
So check out Episode One (for free) and decide it you agree with me. Besides, where else can you read a book written by a rocket scientist?
Debt
Collector 1
Susan
Kaye Quinn
Genre: Urban Fantasy with a
Cyberpunk Twist
Date of Publication: Mar 2013
ASIN: B00BW7KXXY
Number of pages: 48
Word Count: 12,000 words
Cover Artist: Steven Novak
Book Description:
What's your life worth on the
open market?
In this gritty urban fantasy,
debt collectors take your life energy and give it to someone more
"worthy"... all while paying the price with black marks on their
souls.
Lirium plays the part of the grim
reaper well, with his dark trenchcoat, jackboots, and the black marks on his
soul that every debt collector carries. He's just in it for his cut, the ten
percent of the life energy he collects before he transfers it on to the high
potentials, the people who will make the world a better place with their
brains, their work, and their lives.
That hit of life energy, a bottle
of vodka, and a visit from one of Madam Anastazja's sex workers keep him alive,
stable, and mostly sane... until he collects again. But when his recovery
ritual is disrupted by a sex worker who isn't what she seems, he has to choose
between doing an illegal hit for a girl whose story has more holes than his
soul or facing the bottle alone--a dark pit he's not sure he'll be able to
climb out of again.
***first
episode of the nine-part serial***
"Absolutely
riveting!"
"Quinn
has a way of writing heart-breaking characters."
"You'll
be holding your breath, looking over your shoulder, and begging for more."
Contains
mature content and themes.
Book Trailer: http://youtu.be/0-ngIMiEF1M
Available at Amazon
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OPTIONED FOR VIRTUAL REALITY BY IMMERSIVE ENTERTAINMENT
2014 Semi-Finalist in Science
Fiction in the Kindle Book Awards
It is recommended that you start
with the first season, but each season is a complete story for that debt
collector and can serve as an entry point to the series. There are five planned
seasons in the Debt Collector series, the first four each from the perspective
of a different debt collector with the fifth season bringing all four together.
READING
ORDER
Season One - Lirium – COMPLETE
Episodes 1-9: Delirium, Agony,
Ecstasy, Broken, Driven, Fallen, Promise, Ruthless, Passion
Season Two - Wraith **available
for pre-order** releases 12.15.14
Episodes 10-18: Wraith, Specter,
Menace, Temptation, Shattered, Penance, Judgment, Corruption, Atonement
Excerpt:
My jackboots are
new, the latest ultra-light material out of Hong Kong’s synthetics district,
and they make a strange squeaking sound against the hospital floor. It’s the
kind of sound that might gather snickers or a raised eyebrow, but no one looks
at me, at least not on purpose. I stroll past the ICU desk, taking my time,
breathing in the antiseptic smell that masks the odor of death held back by
machines and drugs and round-the-clock care. The nurses duck their heads and
study their charts, ignoring me. As if catching my eye might mean I’m coming to
collect their debt, rather than Mr. Henry’s in Room 301.
The floor is so
highly polished that I see the reflection of my trenchcoat running ahead of me,
black as a midnight grave, a spook that lives on the surface of the
oft-scrubbed tiles. It reaches the door to 301 before me and disappears in the
dim, flickering light coming from the room. The spook has gone back where he
belongs, into the dark recesses of my soul, assuming I still have one. If I was
a betting man, I would say the odds of having a soul keep getting longer with
every transfer I do. The older debt collectors, the ones who are still alive,
don’t have anything shining out of their dull-glass eyes, even when they’re
hyped up on a transfer. There’s no telling what my eyes look like.
I stopped
looking in the mirror a long time ago.
Mr. Henry’s hooked
up in all the usual places—tubes in his arms and monitor patches hovering over
his temples and the blue-veined skin of his chest. His knobbed knees and
shriveled legs stick out the end of the blanket. I don’t know if he’s tossed
the blanket aside or the nurses just forgot to cover him up again after his
sponge bath or whatever they do to prepare patients for a debt transfer.
Goosebumps raise the hair on what’s left of his legs into a small forest of
gray fur. I tug the thin, white-weave blanket over his exposed legs, and Mr.
Henry opens his eyes.
They’re pale
green and watery—washed out and used up like the rest of him.
“You’ve come for
me,” he says.
I pick up one of
the hard-backed, plastic hospital chairs, the kind that makes you uncomfortable
sticking around the ICU, just in case all the death-waiting-to-happen doesn’t
do the trick. I carefully set it down, backward facing at the head of Mr.
Henry’s bed, and settle in. I don’t answer him, just study him for a moment
over my laced fingers.
“What’s your
name, son?” he asks, which makes me lean back and mentally check over his file
again. No, he’s not an Alzheimer’s patient. He shouldn’t think I’m his son. And
I’m only twenty, but no one’s mistaken me for a boy in a while, not since I
started collecting.
“Lirium,” I say.
It’s just my collector name, short for Delirium. Some punk collector thought it
was funny when we went through training and it stuck. I don’t use my real name
anymore, so it’s as good as any. Most people don’t ask.
“Is it going to hurt, Lirium?” His hand
wanders out from the blanket, shaking a little and fluttering around his chest,
like it’s searching for something. Then it lands on the rail of his bed and
grips it.
“No, sir.”
Relief gushes through me like water from a busted hose. When patients have been
properly prepared, that’s the question they ask. It means they’re ready. I
should thank the nurses on the way out, if I can get one of them to look at me.
“It won’t hurt at all, Mr. Henry. In fact, it will be a relief.”
This isn’t really
true, but I imagine it will be better than what he’s feeling now, all the aches
and pains of the cancer slowly eating him from the inside out. This is where I
usually tell them that transferring out is a good thing and how paying their
debt will make the world a better place. I tell them it’s better for
everyone—they get relief from having to live the last painful stages of their
disease, they’re no longer a drain on the resources of the world, and someone
else, someone in the height of their productivity, whose contributions to the
world will be long lasting, will receive their debt and do even more with it
than they can imagine. And I get my cut. Everyone wins!
I usually leave
out that last part.
About
the Author:
Susan Kaye Quinn is the author of
the bestselling Mindjack Trilogy and the Debt Collector serial, as well as
other speculative fiction novels and short stories. Her work has appeared in
the Synchronic anthology and has been optioned for Virtual Reality by Immersive
Entertainment. Her business card says "Author and Rocket Scientist"
but she mostly sits around in her PJs in awe that she gets to write full time.
Subscribe to the newsletter for a
free short story: http://smarturl.it/SKQnewsletter
More about Sue:
Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Putting Things Off, But in a Good Way
I’ve been in edit mode these past few weeks and, as usual, I can’t help but notice most of my revisions involve rearranging the order in which my sentences are written. Sometimes it’s only a sentence or two, but often it’s whole paragraphs. Occasionally it’s entire scenes. I don’t seem to have the knack for writing things down in the appropriate order during my early drafts.
No surprise there, but what really surprised me was that most of these changes involved moving the words farther back in the story as opposed to moving them forward. I rarely tell the reader stuff too late. My problem is telling the reader stuff too early.
Now I’m sure this happens to all writers to some extent. Most of us infodump in the early drafts, and that pile of information needs to be whittled down and moved back until the reader absolutely needs it. But even when I have a paragraph or two of information I wouldn’t consider an infodump, I’ve discovered it’s still better to move the information as far back in the story as possible.
I suspect my difficulties stem from teaching chemistry classes and giving research seminars. I’ve grown accustomed to explaining a topic in a nice linear fashion that maximizes understanding and (hopefully) decreases the number of questions I get at the end. It doesn’t occur to me to leave out information just to leave the class wanting more. So when I have the characters in my stories explain something to other characters, I usually have them spill everything they know about the subject. Good for teaching, not so good when writing fiction.
In real life, most people explain things in a haphazard manner—wandering about the topic, leaving stuff out, and often contradicting themselves in the process. And good writers take advantage of this quirk. Think about the conversations in your favorite books or movies. Rarely does the character explain things thoroughly. The information usually comes in snippets, with just enough to make you want to know more. And how many times have you seen a character leave out important points during a conversation so that another character (and the reader) can be surprised later?
So even when it makes perfect sense for a character to mention A, B, and C when talking to another character, the story is often better served by mentioning A, vaguely hinting at B, and ignoring C altogether. The trick is to dole out just enough information to leave the reader asking more questions.
No surprise there, but what really surprised me was that most of these changes involved moving the words farther back in the story as opposed to moving them forward. I rarely tell the reader stuff too late. My problem is telling the reader stuff too early.
Now I’m sure this happens to all writers to some extent. Most of us infodump in the early drafts, and that pile of information needs to be whittled down and moved back until the reader absolutely needs it. But even when I have a paragraph or two of information I wouldn’t consider an infodump, I’ve discovered it’s still better to move the information as far back in the story as possible.
I suspect my difficulties stem from teaching chemistry classes and giving research seminars. I’ve grown accustomed to explaining a topic in a nice linear fashion that maximizes understanding and (hopefully) decreases the number of questions I get at the end. It doesn’t occur to me to leave out information just to leave the class wanting more. So when I have the characters in my stories explain something to other characters, I usually have them spill everything they know about the subject. Good for teaching, not so good when writing fiction.
In real life, most people explain things in a haphazard manner—wandering about the topic, leaving stuff out, and often contradicting themselves in the process. And good writers take advantage of this quirk. Think about the conversations in your favorite books or movies. Rarely does the character explain things thoroughly. The information usually comes in snippets, with just enough to make you want to know more. And how many times have you seen a character leave out important points during a conversation so that another character (and the reader) can be surprised later?
So even when it makes perfect sense for a character to mention A, B, and C when talking to another character, the story is often better served by mentioning A, vaguely hinting at B, and ignoring C altogether. The trick is to dole out just enough information to leave the reader asking more questions.
Friday, December 5, 2014
Friday Links -- Volume 55
And it's free!
Thanks to Alex Cavanaugh and all the other writers who contributed to the book.
Here are the links. Go pick up a copy.
Amazon
Barnes and Noble
Kobo
Smashwords
Goodreads
P.S. For some reason, the Amazon book is priced at $0.99.
That's it for this week, Enjoy the writing links.
ChemistKen
Why and How to Copyright Your Self-Published Book
Has Your eBook Been Pirated? What To Do: Step 1
How Original Is Your Idea?
An Easy Approach to Story Building : The Bedtime Story Model
My Inside-Out Character Development Model
Profits of Doom?
Nanowrimo: Act Three questions and prompts
Wednesday, December 3, 2014
Darkness Watching Review
Wednesday morning edit: Whoops, I forgot this was the first Wednesday of the month, so this won't be much of a Insecure Writers Support Group post. Right now, my biggest insecurity (other than the worry I might fall off Alex's list), involves all the wonderful books being released by my writer friends. Books whose words flow better than mine. Books written many times more quickly than I could ever hope to write. Books with professional looking covers. Books that make me wonder if I'll ever finish my book. Etc.
That's enough whining for today. Time to get back to writing. Enjoy the regularly scheduled post below.
ChemistKen
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To celebrate Monday's release of Walking Shadow by Emma Adams, today I'm reviewing Darkness Watching, the first book in the Darkworld Series. There's more information about this series after the review, along with a Rafflecopter giveaway.
First, let's take a look at the book blurb.
Eighteen-year-old Ashlyn is one interview away from her future when she first sees the demons. She thinks she's losing her mind, but the truth is far more frightening: she can see into the Darkworld, the home of spirits– and the darkness is staring back.
Desperate to escape the demons, Ash accepts a place at a university in the small town of Blackstone - little knowing that it isn't coincidence that led her there but the pull of the Venantium, the sorcerers who maintain the barrier keeping demons from crossing from the Darkworld into our own world.
All-night parties, new friendships and a life without rules or limits are all part of the package of student life - but demons never give up, and their focus on Ash has attracted the attention of every sorcerer in the area. Ash is soon caught between her new life and a group of other students with a connection to the Darkworld, who could offer the answers she's looking for. The demons want something from her, and someone is determined to kill her before she can find out what it is.
In a world where darkness lurks beneath the surface, not everyone is what they appear to be...
The Review My Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Eighteen-year-old Ash doesn’t know it yet, but she’s special. After all, not every university student has to spend their nights fending off shadow creatures and solving magical mysteries.
At first glance, Darkness Watching will seem familiar to readers of this genre. First off, Ash begins seeing scary, purpled-eyed creatures no one else can see. Then she receives an invite to attend Blackstone, a school she doesn’t remember applying to. And once she arrives at the school, it doesn’t take long for her to discover that not only does she have an affinity for magic, but that some of the other students do as well.
But that’s where many of the similarities to other books end. It’s not your typical magically-imbued girl goes off to prep school to battle vampires, werewolves, or the obligatory group of rich snooty girls. It’s not filled with teenage angst and there are no interspecies love triangles. Heck, Blackstone isn’t even a school of magic. This is a simple, yet mystery-filled story about a teenager trying to figure out why weird things are happening to her. There are plenty of twists and turns as she learns who she can trust and who she can’t. She’s not out to save the world, just her own sanity, and quite possibly, her life.
The pacing is good. The story is always moving toward the next mystery, and little time is wasted on fluff that doesn’t drive the story forward. You learn about the Darkworld in bits and pieces. Not so fast as to overwhelm you, but not so slowly you become bored.
What I liked most: Darkness Watching made me feel as if I were back in college again, but with the added bonus of being in England as opposed to Missouri. I admit to being a bit of an Anglophile, so the idea of stomping around pubs, perusing ancient libraries, and exploring cemeteries in England while dabbling in magic ranks pretty high on my wish list, and the author’s writing style left me feeling as if I was right there doing it as opposed to watching a movie. Thanks, Emma.
I also enjoyed the colorful characters, although some of them seemed a little too similar, which meant I occasionally had trouble remembering who was who. Of course, I have that same problem during movies too, so perhaps it’s just me. But a few more distinguishing characteristics might have been nice.
What I didn’t like: My only real problem was that sometimes Ash avoided asking obvious questions about the Darkworld and her abilities, often deciding to keep them to herself for no apparent reason.
My only other complaint was that Ash didn’t seem to spend much time doing schoolwork. Supposedly the first year at University is the easiest, so maybe you really can get away with that, but if the next book in the Darkworld series occurs during her second year, she better spend more time in the library! :)
Oh, did I mention I’m looking forward to the sequel?
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
When you have a connection to the Darkworld, nowhere is truly safe.
Ashlyn has found a new home in Blackstone, but when a spate of grave robberies across the country spark fears that someone is practicing illegal sorcery, she comes under the radar of the Venantium, the protectors of the Barrier between her world and the Darkworld, who are suspicious of any sorcerer unaware of their origins.
The trouble is, what Ash does know might just get her killed.
Sufferers of the dangerous condition known as the vampire’s curse are being brutally killed, and the latest victim is Leo’s guardian, the ex-head of the Venantium. Ash determines to help Leo find out what’s really going on, but it isn’t long before events are spiralling out of control. The dead are rising from their graves, and the barriers around Blackstone are threatened by a demon which looks exactly like Ash herself…
Amazon Amazon UK
And here's more information on the
first in the series, Darkness Watching
(Darkworld #1)
Fear's Touch:
A Darkworld Novella is also available now!
This is a standalone novella, intended as a prequel to the Darkworld series. As it takes place one year before the events of Darkness Watching, it doesn’t contain any spoilers (although it does hint at things which will come into play later in the series).
Now a reluctant graduate, Emma refuses to settle down and be normal. When not embarking on wild excursions, she edits and proofreads novels for various publishing houses and reads an insane number of books. At the age of 21, she signed a publishing contract with Curiosity Quills Press for the first book in her creepy urban fantasy Darkworld series. DARKNESS WATCHING was published in October 2013, the first in a five-book series. Emma’s books tend to contain monsters, magic, and wildly inappropriate humour.
a Rafflecopter giveaway
That's enough whining for today. Time to get back to writing. Enjoy the regularly scheduled post below.
ChemistKen
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To celebrate Monday's release of Walking Shadow by Emma Adams, today I'm reviewing Darkness Watching, the first book in the Darkworld Series. There's more information about this series after the review, along with a Rafflecopter giveaway.
First, let's take a look at the book blurb.
Eighteen-year-old Ashlyn is one interview away from her future when she first sees the demons. She thinks she's losing her mind, but the truth is far more frightening: she can see into the Darkworld, the home of spirits– and the darkness is staring back.
Desperate to escape the demons, Ash accepts a place at a university in the small town of Blackstone - little knowing that it isn't coincidence that led her there but the pull of the Venantium, the sorcerers who maintain the barrier keeping demons from crossing from the Darkworld into our own world.
All-night parties, new friendships and a life without rules or limits are all part of the package of student life - but demons never give up, and their focus on Ash has attracted the attention of every sorcerer in the area. Ash is soon caught between her new life and a group of other students with a connection to the Darkworld, who could offer the answers she's looking for. The demons want something from her, and someone is determined to kill her before she can find out what it is.
In a world where darkness lurks beneath the surface, not everyone is what they appear to be...
The Review My Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
Eighteen-year-old Ash doesn’t know it yet, but she’s special. After all, not every university student has to spend their nights fending off shadow creatures and solving magical mysteries.
At first glance, Darkness Watching will seem familiar to readers of this genre. First off, Ash begins seeing scary, purpled-eyed creatures no one else can see. Then she receives an invite to attend Blackstone, a school she doesn’t remember applying to. And once she arrives at the school, it doesn’t take long for her to discover that not only does she have an affinity for magic, but that some of the other students do as well.
But that’s where many of the similarities to other books end. It’s not your typical magically-imbued girl goes off to prep school to battle vampires, werewolves, or the obligatory group of rich snooty girls. It’s not filled with teenage angst and there are no interspecies love triangles. Heck, Blackstone isn’t even a school of magic. This is a simple, yet mystery-filled story about a teenager trying to figure out why weird things are happening to her. There are plenty of twists and turns as she learns who she can trust and who she can’t. She’s not out to save the world, just her own sanity, and quite possibly, her life.
The pacing is good. The story is always moving toward the next mystery, and little time is wasted on fluff that doesn’t drive the story forward. You learn about the Darkworld in bits and pieces. Not so fast as to overwhelm you, but not so slowly you become bored.
What I liked most: Darkness Watching made me feel as if I were back in college again, but with the added bonus of being in England as opposed to Missouri. I admit to being a bit of an Anglophile, so the idea of stomping around pubs, perusing ancient libraries, and exploring cemeteries in England while dabbling in magic ranks pretty high on my wish list, and the author’s writing style left me feeling as if I was right there doing it as opposed to watching a movie. Thanks, Emma.
I also enjoyed the colorful characters, although some of them seemed a little too similar, which meant I occasionally had trouble remembering who was who. Of course, I have that same problem during movies too, so perhaps it’s just me. But a few more distinguishing characteristics might have been nice.
What I didn’t like: My only real problem was that sometimes Ash avoided asking obvious questions about the Darkworld and her abilities, often deciding to keep them to herself for no apparent reason.
My only other complaint was that Ash didn’t seem to spend much time doing schoolwork. Supposedly the first year at University is the easiest, so maybe you really can get away with that, but if the next book in the Darkworld series occurs during her second year, she better spend more time in the library! :)
Oh, did I mention I’m looking forward to the sequel?
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
When you have a connection to the Darkworld, nowhere is truly safe.
Ashlyn has found a new home in Blackstone, but when a spate of grave robberies across the country spark fears that someone is practicing illegal sorcery, she comes under the radar of the Venantium, the protectors of the Barrier between her world and the Darkworld, who are suspicious of any sorcerer unaware of their origins.
The trouble is, what Ash does know might just get her killed.
Sufferers of the dangerous condition known as the vampire’s curse are being brutally killed, and the latest victim is Leo’s guardian, the ex-head of the Venantium. Ash determines to help Leo find out what’s really going on, but it isn’t long before events are spiralling out of control. The dead are rising from their graves, and the barriers around Blackstone are threatened by a demon which looks exactly like Ash herself…
Amazon Amazon UK
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And here's more information on the
first in the series, Darkness Watching
(Darkworld #1)
Reviews
“In the vein of Buffy and Supernatural, DARKNESS WATCHING found that perfect balance between the freaky and the fun.” - YA author Jen Estes
"Demons, Sorcerers, evil, and secrets. Could you ask for a better supernatural suspense set-up?...It's full of suspense, danger, evil and dark humor. The plot is original, and completely gripping. From the first page, this book had me hooked." - Rose at Desert Rose Reviews
"A suspenseful first part to an intriguing new fantasy series." - Sharon Stevenson, supernatural author
“The story is extremely well-written with effortless, flowing prose, and the original magic-user mythology and Darkworld creatures are very entertaining. The author took what might have been over-done premise and twisted it into something very fresh and exciting.” - Lexa Cain, author of Soul Cutter
"This is a wildly different story than any I have read about demons...I loved it!" - Kathy at Bookmarks, Spoilers, and Happily-Ever-Afters
“In the vein of Buffy and Supernatural, DARKNESS WATCHING found that perfect balance between the freaky and the fun.” - YA author Jen Estes
"Demons, Sorcerers, evil, and secrets. Could you ask for a better supernatural suspense set-up?...It's full of suspense, danger, evil and dark humor. The plot is original, and completely gripping. From the first page, this book had me hooked." - Rose at Desert Rose Reviews
"A suspenseful first part to an intriguing new fantasy series." - Sharon Stevenson, supernatural author
“The story is extremely well-written with effortless, flowing prose, and the original magic-user mythology and Darkworld creatures are very entertaining. The author took what might have been over-done premise and twisted it into something very fresh and exciting.” - Lexa Cain, author of Soul Cutter
"This is a wildly different story than any I have read about demons...I loved it!" - Kathy at Bookmarks, Spoilers, and Happily-Ever-Afters
Fear's Touch:
A Darkworld Novella is also available now! This is a standalone novella, intended as a prequel to the Darkworld series. As it takes place one year before the events of Darkness Watching, it doesn’t contain any spoilers (although it does hint at things which will come into play later in the series).
Freakish powers and staring demon eyes
aren’t part of Claudia’s plans for the future – and neither is ending up stuck
at the gloomy, isolated University of Blackstone. But bad life decisions are
the least of her problems, when a split-second decision to help out another
magic-user puts her in the crossfire of both the shadow-beasts and the creepy
organisation which hunt them down.
Claudia’s never had to worry about
making the right choice before, but every decision matters when you have a
Darkworld connection. Soon, she’s going to have to make a choice: turn her back
on the crazy and try to live a normal life, or take the monsters down.
But in a world where everyone seems to
have secrets, can she really trust her fellow magic-users – or even herself?
Emma spent her
childhood creating imaginary worlds to compensate for a disappointingly average
reality, so it was probably inevitable that she ended up writing bizarre, fantastical
stories. She was born in Birmingham, UK, which she fled at the first
opportunity to study English Literature at Lancaster University. In her three
years at Lancaster, she hiked up mountains, skydived in Australia, and endured
a traumatic episode involving a swarm of bees in the Costa Rican jungle. She
also entertained her creative writing group and baffled her tutors by
submitting strange fantasy tales featuring dragons and supernatural monsters to
workshops. These included her first publication, a rather bleak dystopian
piece, and a disturbing story about a homicidal duck (which she hopes will
never see the light of day).
Now a reluctant graduate, Emma refuses to settle down and be normal. When not embarking on wild excursions, she edits and proofreads novels for various publishing houses and reads an insane number of books. At the age of 21, she signed a publishing contract with Curiosity Quills Press for the first book in her creepy urban fantasy Darkworld series. DARKNESS WATCHING was published in October 2013, the first in a five-book series. Emma’s books tend to contain monsters, magic, and wildly inappropriate humour.
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Friday, November 21, 2014
Friday Links -- Volume 54 and Cover Reveal for Walking Shadow
It's Friday, thank goodness. I'm tired of driving two hours back and forth to work in the snow. Fortunately, if all goes the way the weathermen say it will, the snow will be gone by the weekend. Yay!
Friday is also a special day for Emma Adams, since it's cover reveal day for her new book, Walking Shadow. So be sure to check it out along with this week's links.
Have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
Free Day Book Promotion Checklist
Creating Strong Characters—Some Typical Challenges
Should Authors on the Traditional Path Pay an Editor?
Everything I Need to Know About Character, I Learned From Buffy
Pen Name Launch: What worked and what didn’t for marketing
Choosing Which Thoughts to Italicize
Nanowrimo: Midpoint
When you have a connection to the Darkworld, nowhere is truly safe.
Ashlyn has found a new home in Blackstone, but when a spate of grave robberies across the country spark fears that someone is practicing illegal sorcery, she comes under the radar of the Venantium, the protectors of the Barrier between her world and the Darkworld, who are suspicious of any sorcerer unaware of their origins.
The trouble is, what Ash does know might just get her killed.
Sufferers of the dangerous condition known as the vampire’s curse are being brutally killed, and the latest victim is Leo’s guardian, the ex-head of the Venantium. Ash determines to help Leo find out what’s really going on, but it isn’t long before events are spiralling out of control. The dead are rising from their graves, and the barriers around Blackstone are threatened by a demon which looks exactly like Ash herself…
Release date: 1st December 2014
And here's more information on the
first in the series, Darkness Watching
(Darkworld #1)
Fear's Touch:
A Darkworld Novella is also available now!
This is a standalone novella, intended as a prequel to the Darkworld series. As it takes place one year before the events of Darkness Watching, it doesn’t contain any spoilers (although it does hint at things which will come into play later in the series).
Now a reluctant graduate, Emma refuses to settle down and be normal. When not embarking on wild excursions, she edits and proofreads novels for various publishing houses and reads an insane number of books. At the age of 21, she signed a publishing contract with Curiosity Quills Press for the first book in her creepy urban fantasy Darkworld series. DARKNESS WATCHING was published in October 2013, the first in a five-book series. Emma’s books tend to contain monsters, magic, and wildly inappropriate humour.
Friday is also a special day for Emma Adams, since it's cover reveal day for her new book, Walking Shadow. So be sure to check it out along with this week's links.
Have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
Free Day Book Promotion Checklist
Creating Strong Characters—Some Typical Challenges
Should Authors on the Traditional Path Pay an Editor?
Everything I Need to Know About Character, I Learned From Buffy
Pen Name Launch: What worked and what didn’t for marketing
Choosing Which Thoughts to Italicize
Nanowrimo: Midpoint
Walking Shadows Cover Reveal
When you have a connection to the Darkworld, nowhere is truly safe.
Ashlyn has found a new home in Blackstone, but when a spate of grave robberies across the country spark fears that someone is practicing illegal sorcery, she comes under the radar of the Venantium, the protectors of the Barrier between her world and the Darkworld, who are suspicious of any sorcerer unaware of their origins.
The trouble is, what Ash does know might just get her killed.
Sufferers of the dangerous condition known as the vampire’s curse are being brutally killed, and the latest victim is Leo’s guardian, the ex-head of the Venantium. Ash determines to help Leo find out what’s really going on, but it isn’t long before events are spiralling out of control. The dead are rising from their graves, and the barriers around Blackstone are threatened by a demon which looks exactly like Ash herself…
Release date: 1st December 2014
And here's more information on the
first in the series, Darkness Watching
(Darkworld #1)
Eighteen-year-old Ashlyn is one
interview away from her future when she first sees the demons. She thinks she's
losing her mind, but the truth is far more frightening: she can see into
the Darkworld, the home of spirits– and the darkness is staring back.
Desperate to escape the demons, Ash accepts a place at a university in the small town of Blackstone - little knowing that it isn't coincidence that led her there but the pull of the Venantium, the sorcerers who maintain the barrier keeping demons from crossing from the Darkworld into our own world.
All-night parties, new friendships and a life without rules or limits are all part of the package of student life - but demons never give up, and their focus on Ash has attracted the attention of every sorcerer in the area. Ash is soon caught between her new life and a group of other students with a connection to the Darkworld, who could offer the answers she's looking for. The demons want something from her, and someone is determined to kill her before she can find out what it is.
In a world where darkness lurks beneath the surface, not everyone is what they appear to be...
Desperate to escape the demons, Ash accepts a place at a university in the small town of Blackstone - little knowing that it isn't coincidence that led her there but the pull of the Venantium, the sorcerers who maintain the barrier keeping demons from crossing from the Darkworld into our own world.
All-night parties, new friendships and a life without rules or limits are all part of the package of student life - but demons never give up, and their focus on Ash has attracted the attention of every sorcerer in the area. Ash is soon caught between her new life and a group of other students with a connection to the Darkworld, who could offer the answers she's looking for. The demons want something from her, and someone is determined to kill her before she can find out what it is.
In a world where darkness lurks beneath the surface, not everyone is what they appear to be...
Reviews
“In the vein of Buffy and Supernatural, DARKNESS WATCHING found that perfect balance between the freaky and the fun.” - YA author Jen Estes
"Demons, Sorcerers, evil, and secrets. Could you ask for a better supernatural suspense set-up?...It's full of suspense, danger, evil and dark humor. The plot is original, and completely gripping. From the first page, this book had me hooked." - Rose at Desert Rose Reviews
"A suspenseful first part to an intriguing new fantasy series." - Sharon Stevenson, supernatural author
“The story is extremely well-written with effortless, flowing prose, and the original magic-user mythology and Darkworld creatures are very entertaining. The author took what might have been over-done premise and twisted it into something very fresh and exciting.” - Lexa Cain, author of Soul Cutter
"This is a wildly different story than any I have read about demons...I loved it!" - Kathy at Bookmarks, Spoilers, and Happily-Ever-Afters
“In the vein of Buffy and Supernatural, DARKNESS WATCHING found that perfect balance between the freaky and the fun.” - YA author Jen Estes
"Demons, Sorcerers, evil, and secrets. Could you ask for a better supernatural suspense set-up?...It's full of suspense, danger, evil and dark humor. The plot is original, and completely gripping. From the first page, this book had me hooked." - Rose at Desert Rose Reviews
"A suspenseful first part to an intriguing new fantasy series." - Sharon Stevenson, supernatural author
“The story is extremely well-written with effortless, flowing prose, and the original magic-user mythology and Darkworld creatures are very entertaining. The author took what might have been over-done premise and twisted it into something very fresh and exciting.” - Lexa Cain, author of Soul Cutter
"This is a wildly different story than any I have read about demons...I loved it!" - Kathy at Bookmarks, Spoilers, and Happily-Ever-Afters
Fear's Touch:
A Darkworld Novella is also available now! This is a standalone novella, intended as a prequel to the Darkworld series. As it takes place one year before the events of Darkness Watching, it doesn’t contain any spoilers (although it does hint at things which will come into play later in the series).
Freakish powers and staring demon eyes
aren’t part of Claudia’s plans for the future – and neither is ending up stuck
at the gloomy, isolated University of Blackstone. But bad life decisions are
the least of her problems, when a split-second decision to help out another
magic-user puts her in the crossfire of both the shadow-beasts and the creepy
organisation which hunt them down.
Claudia’s never had to worry about
making the right choice before, but every decision matters when you have a
Darkworld connection. Soon, she’s going to have to make a choice: turn her back
on the crazy and try to live a normal life, or take the monsters down.
But in a world where everyone seems to
have secrets, can she really trust her fellow magic-users – or even herself?
Emma spent her
childhood creating imaginary worlds to compensate for a disappointingly average
reality, so it was probably inevitable that she ended up writing bizarre, fantastical
stories. She was born in Birmingham, UK, which she fled at the first
opportunity to study English Literature at Lancaster University. In her three
years at Lancaster, she hiked up mountains, skydived in Australia, and endured
a traumatic episode involving a swarm of bees in the Costa Rican jungle. She
also entertained her creative writing group and baffled her tutors by
submitting strange fantasy tales featuring dragons and supernatural monsters to
workshops. These included her first publication, a rather bleak dystopian
piece, and a disturbing story about a homicidal duck (which she hopes will
never see the light of day).
Now a reluctant graduate, Emma refuses to settle down and be normal. When not embarking on wild excursions, she edits and proofreads novels for various publishing houses and reads an insane number of books. At the age of 21, she signed a publishing contract with Curiosity Quills Press for the first book in her creepy urban fantasy Darkworld series. DARKNESS WATCHING was published in October 2013, the first in a five-book series. Emma’s books tend to contain monsters, magic, and wildly inappropriate humour.
Wednesday, November 19, 2014
How Important is Deep POV? Really?
Last week, Angela Quarles posted about deep POV and the problems that can occur when using the words “before” and “until.” In many cases, these words tell instead of show, which often distance the reader from the character. She presented three passages from her latest WIP where she’d used those words and then explained how she’d fixed them up to keep the reader in deep POV. All good stuff.
Except for the fact that in all three cases, I preferred the original version.
Now I admit I’m not an expert on deep POV. Heck, I still struggle with showing and telling. I don’t read many romance novels (where deep POV is most widely used) and the fantasy stories I read rarely utilize deep POV. To be honest, my reader’s palate may simply too immature at this stage of my writing career to fully grasp the concept.
Let me give you an example from her post.
Before: He angled up toward Dauphin Street, and she waited until he disappeared around the corner before she set off after him. She peeked around the corner. His tall form weaved through a light crowd.
After: He angled up toward Dauphin Street, and disappeared around the corner. She scurried to the corner and peeked around. His tall form weaved through a light crowd.
I understand the first version is a little telling, but personally I don’t have much of a problem with that. In fact, I preferred the telling version because it gave me a better understanding of her interior thoughts and motives during the sequence of events, as opposed to the second version, which seemed more like a formal recitation of the events.
Now I’m sure Angela’s fans enjoy her writing style and will love the changes. But I suspect my stories will always tend more toward the first version. It's what I'm most comfortable with.
So is there any hope for me as a fantasy writer?
Except for the fact that in all three cases, I preferred the original version.
Now I admit I’m not an expert on deep POV. Heck, I still struggle with showing and telling. I don’t read many romance novels (where deep POV is most widely used) and the fantasy stories I read rarely utilize deep POV. To be honest, my reader’s palate may simply too immature at this stage of my writing career to fully grasp the concept.
Let me give you an example from her post.
Before: He angled up toward Dauphin Street, and she waited until he disappeared around the corner before she set off after him. She peeked around the corner. His tall form weaved through a light crowd.
After: He angled up toward Dauphin Street, and disappeared around the corner. She scurried to the corner and peeked around. His tall form weaved through a light crowd.
I understand the first version is a little telling, but personally I don’t have much of a problem with that. In fact, I preferred the telling version because it gave me a better understanding of her interior thoughts and motives during the sequence of events, as opposed to the second version, which seemed more like a formal recitation of the events.
Now I’m sure Angela’s fans enjoy her writing style and will love the changes. But I suspect my stories will always tend more toward the first version. It's what I'm most comfortable with.
So is there any hope for me as a fantasy writer?
Friday, November 14, 2014
Friday Links -- Volume 53
Sorry for not posting on Wednesday. Too many things were going on in my life, including my hurried attempts at rewriting a scene so I could share it with my local crit group on Thursday night.
The response from the crit group?
The scene needs work.
Not too surprising, really. I'm still unsure with how the scene should unfold, and when I'm not comfortable with a scene, my prose goes into the tank. Too much explaining. Details out of order. Poor descriptions. Normally I would have spent another week polishing the words before submitting, but since I didn't submit anything at last month's meeting, I felt obliged to turn something in this month.
My takeaway from all this? Sometimes I just have to bounce ideas off my crit partners to get me out of a writing rut.
Have a great weekend and enjoy the writing links!
ChemistKen
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Getting Reviews
10 Things to Know About Pitching Agents and Editors
Conflict and Series Characters
Three Tips for Creating Evocative Prose
Nanowrimo: Act Two questions and prompts
6 Key Terms in Amazon’s KDP Contract — A Digest for Busy Writers
Sometimes, Two Rights… Make a Wrong
The response from the crit group?
The scene needs work.
Not too surprising, really. I'm still unsure with how the scene should unfold, and when I'm not comfortable with a scene, my prose goes into the tank. Too much explaining. Details out of order. Poor descriptions. Normally I would have spent another week polishing the words before submitting, but since I didn't submit anything at last month's meeting, I felt obliged to turn something in this month.
My takeaway from all this? Sometimes I just have to bounce ideas off my crit partners to get me out of a writing rut.
Have a great weekend and enjoy the writing links!
ChemistKen
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Getting Reviews
10 Things to Know About Pitching Agents and Editors
Conflict and Series Characters
Three Tips for Creating Evocative Prose
Nanowrimo: Act Two questions and prompts
6 Key Terms in Amazon’s KDP Contract — A Digest for Busy Writers
Sometimes, Two Rights… Make a Wrong
Friday, November 7, 2014
Friday Links -- Volume 52
It's Friday again, and this week I'm not sleep-deprived from working on costumes. Does this mean I'll get any more writing done this weekend? Hmmm.....
While cold, dark nights are great for putting me into the mood for writing fantasy stories, they're also great for making me want to curl up in bed and read my Kindle. I never know which way I'll go on the weekend.
And for those of you who have taken time out from NaNoWriMo to read this post, I hope you enjoy the writing links.
Have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
Basics of Print Interior Design
Sometimes You Gotta Suck It UpAnd Write the Darn Outline
Writing Successful Fiction: When What You Don’t Know Trumps What You Do Know
7 Tension-Building Tips for Writing Action Scenes
Scene Breaks: Why Your Story May Not Have Enough of Them
Nanowrimo: Act One questions and prompts
[Insert Annoying Self-Promoting Message Here]
While cold, dark nights are great for putting me into the mood for writing fantasy stories, they're also great for making me want to curl up in bed and read my Kindle. I never know which way I'll go on the weekend.
And for those of you who have taken time out from NaNoWriMo to read this post, I hope you enjoy the writing links.
Have a great weekend!
ChemistKen
Basics of Print Interior Design
Sometimes You Gotta Suck It UpAnd Write the Darn Outline
Writing Successful Fiction: When What You Don’t Know Trumps What You Do Know
7 Tension-Building Tips for Writing Action Scenes
Scene Breaks: Why Your Story May Not Have Enough of Them
Nanowrimo: Act One questions and prompts
[Insert Annoying Self-Promoting Message Here]
Wednesday, November 5, 2014
The Insecure Writer and the Slippage of Time
Today is November's contribution to Alex Cavanaugh's Insecure Writers Support Group.
Why am I an Insecure Writer this month?
Because time seems to be slipping away from me.
As we enter the month of November, I can’t help but recall how much I originally planned to have written by the end of this year. Needless to say, I’m nowhere close to the goals I set back in January. And my biggest question is: Where did the time go?
While I’ve had bouts of good productivity here and there throughout the year, there always seemed to be a constant succession of life events that diverted me away from writing. Working on Halloween costumes, dealing with a sick cat, helping my wife start up a new business, etc., etc. It never seems to end. I know this kind of problem affects all writers, but until I finally write “The End” on one of my books, I’m always going to wonder if it will ever happen. I’m tired of telling myself, “Just wait till next year.”
On a happier note, my daughter’s Enderdragon costume worked out way better than expected. We had to solve many, many problems to make them functional, and even though we were still applying last minute fixes as late as 5:30pm on Friday, she was able to wear them during the Halloween party and partly through the actual trick or treating. (She had to remove the wings once the winds began gusting outside.)
In a month or two, we’ll start working on the next generation of these wings, since she wants to wear them at the Midwest Media con in the spring. Give me strength!
ChemistKen
Friday, October 31, 2014
Friday Links -- Volume 51
Friday couldn't come quickly enough for me this week. I've spent almost every night this October helping my kids work on their Halloween costumes. My son is dressing up as Scout from Team Fortress 2, and that required building lots of props using EVA foam. My daughter is dressing up as an Enderdragon from Minecraft, so I've been building a pair of 3 foot long folding, reticulated wings to give the appropriate effect. I'd post pictures, but as of this morning, the wings still aren't quite finished. (Although I hope my wife finishes them before I get home from work. Oh please, please.)
And to top it all off, I'm suffering through a major head cold which leaves me thinking about how comfortable my bed is all the time. Halloween is my favorite time of the year and usually I'm disappointed when it passes, but this year I can't wait for it to be over so I can drop into bed and stay there for an obscene length of time.
Anyway, here are the links.
Have a great Halloween weekend and use the extra hour of sleep wisely.
BTW, Crystal Collier's book, Moonless, is free today. Snag it if you haven't already.
ChemistKen
7 Tips for Staying Safe on Twitter — Guest: Marcy Kennedy
Using Layers to Pre-Write Your Scenes
Media Kits - Easy as 1.2.3.
The March of the Adjectives
15 ways to promote your book with a book trailer
And to top it all off, I'm suffering through a major head cold which leaves me thinking about how comfortable my bed is all the time. Halloween is my favorite time of the year and usually I'm disappointed when it passes, but this year I can't wait for it to be over so I can drop into bed and stay there for an obscene length of time.
Anyway, here are the links.
Have a great Halloween weekend and use the extra hour of sleep wisely.
BTW, Crystal Collier's book, Moonless, is free today. Snag it if you haven't already.
ChemistKen
7 Tips for Staying Safe on Twitter — Guest: Marcy Kennedy
Using Layers to Pre-Write Your Scenes
Media Kits - Easy as 1.2.3.
The March of the Adjectives
15 ways to promote your book with a book trailer
Wednesday, October 29, 2014
Soulless Book Tour
Six years ago, when I first began my journey into the world of writing, I didn't know what I was getting myself into. During that time, I've experienced many ups and downs, but one of the things I've always enjoyed is making friends with other writers.
One of those writers is Crystal Collier.
Earlier this year, she released Moonless, the first book in her Maiden of Time series. Today I’m honored to be a part of the blog tour for her second book in the series, Soulless.
Enough of my blathering. On to the important stuff!
BTW, you can still snag a free copy of Moonless! See details below.
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Title: SOULLESSSeries: Maiden of Time
Author: Crystal Collier
Pages: 263
Pub Date: October 13, 2014
Publisher: Raybourne Publishing
ISBN: 9781629830032
The Soulless are coming.
Alexia manipulated time to save the man of her dreams, and lost her best friend to red-eyed wraiths. Still grieving, she struggles to reconcile her loss with what was gained: her impending marriage. But when her wedding is destroyed by the Soulless—who then steal the only protection her people have—she’s forced to unleash her true power.
And risk losing everything.
What reviewers are saying:
"5 Stars." - Invincible Love of Reading Book Blog
"I LOVED it! So good. Seriously...exceeded my expectations." -Kristin Smith, advanced reviewer
"Entirely unique and chilling." Gabby @ What’s Beyond Forks
"Unputdownable." T.C. Mckee, BookFish Books
Excerpt:
Kiren sprinted faster, glancing up. The hollow loomed just ahead. Wind whipped in his ears, the rich scent of grain masking his own perspiration. Hisses whispered through the frosted breeze, nearing.
Searing heat raked across his back. He whirled and slammed a fist into the creature’s jaw. It flew off to the side.
He kept moving and reached back to examine the flesh, still intact, but his jacket was shorn. Midnight writhed toward him from all directions. His heart sank.
Reaching down, he found a dead tree branch and hefted it. If they wanted to take him, they were going to see a fight like they’d never known!
He turned at the crunch of stalks, swinging the branch upward. It rammed a creature’s chin and threw it back into a mass of blackness. Creatures toppled like wooden dolls.
Kiren lumbered past them, toward the pitiful copse of trees. Twenty feet more.
The enemy circled in, cutting him off. He bit down. His muscles tightened. His knuckles popped.
He swung!
Two bodies thudded to the ground. Weight slammed into the back of his legs. His knees crunched into the earth. Pain shot up his legs. He couldn’t move, weighed down by multiple enemies. He flailed around, swinging blindly. The wood connected again and again, but he couldn’t free his legs. The branch was yanked out of his grasp, raking a trail of splinters across his palm.
Bodies crashed down.
Blackness consumed the world.
Giveaway:
Author Bio:
Crystal Collier is a young adult author who pens dark fantasy, historical, and romance hybrids. She can be found practicing her brother-induced ninja skills while teaching children or madly typing about fantastic and impossible creatures. She has lived from coast to coast and now calls Florida home with her creative husband, four littles, and “friend” (a.k.a. the zombie locked in her closet). Secretly, she dreams of world domination and a bottomless supply of cheese. You can find her on her Blog, Facebook, Goodreads, or follow her on Twitter.
